On chockolate Ice Cream
CirCles;;;;Running
around???!?!?!, HoOps of
FiReS.whooooooosh-~-~-`
freelywheelydealy
iridescence is YOUR MOM!!! electric
eelswimming
Aeroionizationalistic
lllllleeeeeeaaaaaapppppp into
oneternity
?relieving reliving?
soullessnessensselluos
around???!?!?!, HoOps of
FiReS.whooooooosh-~-~-`
freelywheelydealy
iridescence is YOUR MOM!!! electric
eelswimming
Aeroionizationalistic
lllllleeeeeeaaaaaapppppp into
oneternity
?relieving reliving?
soullessnessensselluos
posted by Eat a Book at 5:37 PM
2 Comments:
i see some real similarities in your style in this work to the Fireside poets like Longfellow and Holmes here...maybe work on the rhyme scheme a little bit though...
(maybe i'm kidding, maybe i'm not)
Yeah this is definitely a homey little comforter like the firesiders.
Seriously though, more like a cummings (kinda like buffalo bills or the moon poems.)
Thanks for the comment
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